Last evening
a poem came to me,
riding on the dark waves of my fourth drink
like a bright white ship.
Spotting you through the distortion of our cocktail glasses
I paused and thoughtfully rubbed my gin,
steering the ship in the approximate direction of where you were.
The rest of the evening was the same sea story:
You were a pirate, come to rob my ship.
And as I gazed at your convex dimple,
part eclipsed by an olive,
you stole all my metaphors
and a beautiful closing couplet,
leaving an empty bright white vessel.
This morning, there is a throbbing head in the glass
where an olive once was,
and I am left craving
a dead pirate's society.
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11 comments:
wow, cool last stanza di!
Hehehehe. I know people who'll kill me for that lame dead-pirate's-society item.
Oh My God that is beautiful. My little Noopy is all grown up (snif!). Seriously, I'm doing my PhD in Lit, thinking of specializing in poetry, and yours is way up there.
Love you. You should start a Live Poets Society.
Thank you, my beauty. Glad you like. Feel free to use my stuff for essays, analyses and the general promotion of impoverished writers in the third world. ;)
Meanwhile, you have not been writing at all?? Dying to read some Kiranisms. Write, write!
Much love.
very nice dahling! :-)
superb one, suuup it came!
Yes now please grow long beard, wear kurta pajama and change name to Anoopansh Rai Bachchan.
PS: Your stuff is way better than his, so gimme 5 minit, I will ask him to change name to Harivanshpa Anand, OK? OK.
concave!
Hi Anoopa. How are you? I hear that someone has stolen all your metaphors! The cads.
I have rejuvinated my blog!!!
You can hear and download some of my music.
Hurrah!!!!
you stole all my metaphors
and a beautiful closing couplet,
leaving an empty bright white vessel
WOW!!!!
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